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Liberation

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The Sun,
not yellow, though not golden,
places
itwarm gentle hand on my cheek.

The Breeze
not strong, though not still,
brushes
its cool soft hand across my other cheek.

The Silhouettes,
not few, though not innumerable,
pass
Souls pass not noticing me.
Their feet keep moving
along the paths,
scraping the way already trodden
by so many souls the same.

But

The Butterfly,
only one, that's all it takes
to see
what we souls are doing
for as this Butterfly
uses the Sun to compliment
her orange and black
she lands
on every flow'r,
stopping
to check
stopping to do her job
the job that she loves.
she does not miss one.

Then she finds Him.
another stunning Butterfly
flying about.

And they Dance

they Dance in the Sun
for teh world to see.

The Sun
not yellow, though not golden
Dances...
I'm kind of proud of this one. I like it. I hope you guys can make sense out of it. I was sitting in the park while I wrote it. This all happened. Yes, even (in my eyes) the sun danced. Well, it's light did. I hope you like it!-Steve
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I really like this one. I have a thing for butterflies. :)

I love how the one line is bolded. And the spacing and all. I don't know about anyone else, but it adds an emphasis for me.

And just, imagining where you are and everything that falls into place, it's amazing to see something so simple like that. Something that stands out in the tiniest way.

Great job, Steve.