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I seem to have lost your face in the faces
of my history discontinued and marked for disposal.
New trails will be blazed though not without the pain
and difficulties of cutting down and weeding out you.

I try to remember your house among houses.
The memories we've forged fit in one glass jar.
There's plenty of space which avoids suffocation
but space allows spreading and blurring of the fact.

I wonder if you will ever return to my dreams.
Do I even subconsciously long anymore
for colorful abstractions and multiplied chances
to stitch back together what never was at first?

I can no longer feel the warmth of your heart;
you're too far away for me to feel your radiant heat,
or maybe it was never you that toasted the room,
and now you seem to have stolen the heat out of me.

These places I don't remember;
all the lost races acrew.
Nothing remains to preserve my memories of you.
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This is the first song that I've written from my album project that I'm working on this summer. I may need to change it up though. It's not working as perfectly as I'd like. This is the poem version. Some revisions may need to take place for the lyrical version. It's not singing as smoothly as I'd like, but here it is for you guys! I hope you like it. I hope you feel the bitterness in it. Hope it makes you feel slightly offended. Tell me if it does (and tell me if it doesn't).-Steven
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Mood: Love ~xXNotLostXx Jul 6, 2011  Student Writer
I love this-its really good! check out my work if you ever get the timee(:
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~mode-de-vie Jul 16, 2010  Student Writer
The bitterness is apparent. I want to hear the recording you have! I'm curious to see how it sounds. :)
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~Death-By-Romance Jul 24, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Working on it! The poem had to change more than the last one. We'll see how it goes.
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~mode-de-vie Jul 25, 2010  Student Writer
:eager: Yay!
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