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My City

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Down     this     very     long,
           
               Very   famous
                                          street

                        I travel,
                                       not very fast,

            Carried by my
                                         feet.


Each
              foot
    takes
                  a step

           On          each

                 city        block


Leaving
                my invisible
       trace

Everywhere      I've     walked.
A poem I wrote today in Borders. I am not sure I really like where the words are placed but I hope you guys do. This is written about my favorite city in the world New York City!-Steve
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I love the way it's placed! It gives a cool effect [since you talk about footsteps, it's almost like your reading foosteps]